Bam! Jarred awake, Lucy turned to her sister; but Susan snored softly, undisturbed.
Bam! Lucy slid from the bed and scurried through the gloom.
Bam! Flinging wide the wardrobe door, she startled as the bold winds of another world caressed her face.
Uh-oh, Kimi. Something’s afoot. 😮
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“scurried through the gloom” and ” bold winds of another world..” I want to know more!
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Forget the wind, what was pounding on the door?!? Be careful! 😉
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Wow! What a great start!
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Now I am intrigued. I want more! I hope you develop this story line further.
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Oooo creepy
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Thanks, Beeray. It was a fun challenge.
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Magical adventures await! ❤
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I’ve always loved the concept of other worlds hiding just out of sight!
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Ummm… NOPE!
LOVED IT! Yay, portals to other worlds!
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It was cool to be forced into just 42 words. I haven’t done many writing challenges before. I think last year’s blog hop was my first!
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Yeah Write is an amazing group – if you want to read good writing and get good feedback that’s where to be!
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Great sensory details, Kim. I was thinking this was a scary twist on Narnia, but the caressing at the end changed that.
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Nice!
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